Reviews For One Step Further
This. Was. *Awesome*! I loved the sex, but I also loved the characterizations. Thank you!
Oh, all I have to give this is a happy, happy sigh. And, mmmmm. Thank you!
OMG Hot! I loved John being all out of it and basically handing himself over to Rodney, and I loved Rodney being all worried and unsure, but pretending he knew exactly what he was doing. Hot, yet also sweet.
Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
27 May 2008 7:22 pm
Love the story and love the illustration too. :)
That was amazingly hot.
Reviewer: lilysaid (Anonymous)
27 May 2008 9:19 am
ooh, very hot AND very sweet, all at once. thanks for posting. :)
Hot and the ending is so sweet. Loved the picture :)
Aw. This was seriously hot and just fantastic for our boys. Loved this. *clicks the "add story to favorties" button*
I've already read this once, but when I saw it posted here I grinned and read it again. Oh yeah. Whew! *fans self*. I love Rodney's thought processes here (Atlantis!sinking) and John's simple 'whoa' (as well as Rodney's "I don't suppose saying 'stop that' will help any". Hot image, great pairing of story to go with it. So pleased to see it here. Thanks!