Reviews For Adrenaline

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Reviewer: Formaldehyde (Signed)
16 Feb 2010 9:32 pm
I love this. It's very edgy, emotionally charged, and from the heart. That, combined with your usual excellent writing skills, makes this a very lovely read. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you for such a lovely comment! :-D
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Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
06 Jun 2008 4:17 pm
This is an excellent story. Though, to tell the truth, I didn't much like it - or John - until the kiss.

Keep up the good writing, Jantique

Author's Response: It definitely wasn't a good situation, until the end. Thanks for commenting!
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Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
04 Jun 2008 10:52 pm
Poor Rodney, having to deal with the heartbreak of John leaving afterwards all the time. Good thing he finally kissed Rodney this time. :]

Author's Response: Not a pretty view of John - good thing he finally wised up. Thanks for commenting!
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
04 Jun 2008 10:04 pm
Yay, I'm glad he got to the kissing part, because it was all a little sad and depressing up to then, even if it was hot, too ;). I liked the style here, how the short, sometimes a little choppy, sentences brought home that feeling of disjointedness that comes with an adrenaline rush and it's aftermath. Hopefully they won't be so broken now.


Author's Response: The style was an experiment for me, so it's good to find out it worked. Thanks for commenting!
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Reviewer: Alinea (Signed)
04 Jun 2008 6:42 pm
great how you sustain the intensity in this story. Really well written and poignant.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it - thanks for commenting!
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