That was so good. I actually went and re-read to see where it had shifted and was nicely done.
The banter, the realizations and humor were all in perfect amount.
Thanks
Author's Response: I like writing 'ah-ha!' moments in my stories when I can - glad you liked it! Thanks!
Reviews For Refining Gold
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
06 Jun 2008 10:16 pm
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
04 Jun 2008 6:48 pm
Great twist! I could really see the snarking-to-keep-each-other-going thing in the desert and, as I said, I loved the twist when John woke up in the infirmary. Still, it gave John his answer regardless, and a good answer it was :).
Laura.
Author's Response: I really enjoy inserting little twists in my stories, especially when answering challenges. Glad you liked it and thanks!
Laura.
Author's Response: I really enjoy inserting little twists in my stories, especially when answering challenges. Glad you liked it and thanks!
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