Reviews For Refining Gold

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Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
07 Jun 2008 3:16 am
That was so good. I actually went and re-read to see where it had shifted and was nicely done.

The banter, the realizations and humor were all in perfect amount.


Author's Response: I like writing 'ah-ha!' moments in my stories when I can - glad you liked it! Thanks!
Chapter 1
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
04 Jun 2008 11:48 pm
Great twist! I could really see the snarking-to-keep-each-other-going thing in the desert and, as I said, I loved the twist when John woke up in the infirmary. Still, it gave John his answer regardless, and a good answer it was :).


Author's Response: I really enjoy inserting little twists in my stories, especially when answering challenges. Glad you liked it and thanks!
Chapter 1