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... GUH. That's ... pretty much all I'm capable of saying right now.

Incredible. Characterization is great and the story made my heart go pitter-patter. The dialogue fits and the vulnerability they show is really sweet.

"Sheppard tugged down the front of his vest and jacket for no reason, worked some imagined crick out of his neck and turned towards the door. "Whatever you say, Jean Luc," McKay had muttered" This was so funny I almost peed in my pants! The rest was magnificently written. With so much love and tenderness and keeping Rodney and John in character too. That's a rare thing. Aurore

i love this to death.

Laughed my ass off while reading this. I just love the descriptions. Well done!