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Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
19 Jun 2008 10:25 pm
I laughed through the whole thing!! John's quirky thoughts, Rodney's "Hello, spawn.", and Victor himself were all so amazingly hilarious that I nearly fell out of my chair.

I thought that John and Rodney were pretty spot on, character wise, and that you had their banter down quite nicely.

Way to go!

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Reviewer: angelwings (Signed)
18 Jun 2008 11:01 pm
lol. that was very funny and very sweet and romantic at the sanme time! ACE!

Author's Response: Glad to hear it.
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Reviewer: Kanetsidohi (Signed)
18 Jun 2008 2:33 pm
That was very good. Really funny!

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