I laughed through the whole thing!! John's quirky thoughts, Rodney's "Hello, spawn.", and Victor himself were all so amazingly hilarious that I nearly fell out of my chair.
I thought that John and Rodney were pretty spot on, character wise, and that you had their banter down quite nicely.
Way to go!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviews For Birds, Bees, and Related Fauna
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
19 Jun 2008 5:25 pm
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Reviewer: angelwings (Signed)
18 Jun 2008 6:01 pm
lol. that was very funny and very sweet and romantic at the sanme time! ACE!
Author's Response: Glad to hear it.
Author's Response: Glad to hear it.
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Reviewer: Kanetsidohi (Signed)
18 Jun 2008 9:33 am
That was very good. Really funny!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks!
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