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Reviewer: Ansku (Signed)
20 Feb 2009 11:33 pm
Scary thought :)

Author's Response: Isn't it?
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Reviewer: miscreant (Anonymous)
23 Jun 2008 1:55 pm
I like the dynamic you've created between john and lorne, and it's a great analogy you've used but you're nuclear physics is off and it bugs me cos I'm pedantic. You mean neutrinos as a product of beta decay,
in this case it should be a positron and a neutrino.

Author's Response: Well, I was thinking of it more along the lines of "neutrons and beta particles and such" as being "neutron emission and beta decay and gamma decay and all those other kinds of particle-spitting involved with radioactive materials.
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
21 Jun 2008 5:29 pm
Interesting take on their relationships and a way that I can see Rodney thinking about it.


Author's Response: Thanks!
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
21 Jun 2008 4:43 pm
What an interesting story! I've always seen Lorne/Sheppard as a pairing that would never happen or work because their personalities wouldn't allow it. Your stories intrigued me though because I could see a post-McKay Sheppard that would look at Lorne differently.

I appreciate this story because I wasn't sure how things were working based on what we were seeing in the other stories.

I still feel badly for Rodney because, while he's right that Lorne mitigates the reactions allowing occasional intimacy, Rodney really doesn't work with John in an intimate relationship. By doing what he is, I feel like Rodney is missing out on finding his own moderating influence. :-)

Forgive my ramblings. I get like this when I enjoy a universe. Thanks for writing this and the other stories.

Author's Response: Heh. I'm making vague plans for Rodney's long-range future, although I'm not settled on anything in particular.
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