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Reviewer: Sheppard'sPie (Anonymous)
21 Sep 2008 7:43 am
Omg! Loved the Lorne and McKay one....So McKay, and the visual I got with Lorne crawling to McKay. WOW!

Author's Response: It's a very pretty image, isn't it?
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Reviewer: Sulien (Signed)
11 Aug 2008 11:58 am
Good lord, I grinned all the way through this and laughed out loud in several spots. Satterfield! And John barking at a treed Rodney (a reference to DH's "Treed Murray"?)! Not to mention that of course John named his ship Enterprise. Yep, I'm still grinning!

Author's Response: Glad you found it amusing!
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
07 Jul 2008 5:20 pm
Nice work! I particularly liked the last one. I think Lorne/McKay would be a hot and workable couple.

Of course, Lorne's about to get a surprise. Rodney strikes me as the type of guy who is quiet with some babbling during sex but totally energized after the fact.

I also liked that it was Sheppard's idea even though I think he & McKay make much better friends than lovers. Maybe then end up sharing Lorne. ;-)

Author's Response: Sharing is the key to airpower. :D
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Reviewer: Faceless (Signed)
07 Jul 2008 9:14 am
Oh, this is sweet! I love Lorne and there are somehow very little fanfictions concerning him. McKay's last line had me laughing very hard. It's so typical. And is was funny that Sheppard suggested this plan, to shut Rodney up! :D

Author's Response: Lorne's very cool and overlooked, yes. Sheppard, meanwhile, is a cunning Sheppard.
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Reviewer: entropy_maximum (Signed)
07 Jul 2008 5:25 am
Bahahahahahahahaha, I love this, 'specially the last one and McKay's "...bad touch, bad - ah. Um. Okay, that's unexpected - oh." Heeeeeee love it!

Author's Response: Thanks!
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Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
06 Jul 2008 11:15 pm
Hahahah. Oh, I loved this. Especially the fith one, with Rodney. =]

Author's Response: Glad to hear it.
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