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Reviewer: Domino (Anonymous)
19 Jul 2008 4:37 am
I loved this!! Such a great idea and I could see this happening at some point. His luck has to run out sometime...

Author's Response: See, that's what I think too. At some point, his team just won't be able to save him, no matter how hard they try. rnrnThanks for commenting! I'm glad you liked it.
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Reviewer: angelwings (Signed)
17 Jul 2008 4:33 pm
ohh i like it. poor shep, i wanna give him a big hug!!

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting! Glad you liked it.
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Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
17 Jul 2008 3:41 am
This was a great concept. I can so see this happening in Pegasus. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting!
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Reviewer: adafrog (Anonymous)
17 Jul 2008 2:40 am
Oh wow. Kind of scary, actually.

Author's Response: Thanks!
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