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Reviewer: WolfenMoondaughter (Signed)
13 Sep 2008 10:23 pm
very intriguing concept -- I've felt for a long time that treating the concept of magic as something antithesis to science rather than as a science itself is a mistake in modern storytelling. :D Also, that love scene was fan*freakin*tastic! Oh, the images in my head ... *fans self* Thank you! *grin*

Author's Response: You're welcome, and thanks for letting me know you liked it!
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Reviewer: sgakaz (Signed)
27 Jul 2008 1:22 am
This was fantastic, magic and espionage and poor Rodney thinking John was dead and John keeping an eye on him...John supposed mentioning his occasional secret surveillance wouldn't help his case any, and loved the last line :)

Author's Response: Great, I'm really glad to know you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: Laryn (Anonymous)
20 Jul 2008 4:23 pm
Wraithbait appears to have eaten my first review, so I'll try again. I really enjoyed this story. The mix of science and magic was delightful, and the extension of that logic into the surrounding story nothing short of brilliant. Nicely done!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad to know you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: Mystic (Signed)
20 Jul 2008 5:13 am
Bitter-sweet with a happy ending, I like that. I like your explinationof magic and science working together. A very good read, thank you for sharing.

Author's Response: Great, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for commenting!
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Reviewer: Fenchurch (Signed)
19 Jul 2008 7:51 pm
I love the way you have blended the magic into a world that it recognisable too! I'm always a total sucker for McShep and I wish that I had voted in the challenge, but thanks for the great story anyway!

Author's Response: Hey, I wish you'd voted too, because we lost by a very small margin! But that's okay, it's also very nice to get comments -- thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
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Reviewer: Jaessamine (Anonymous)
19 Jul 2008 6:40 pm
I agree, this AU would easily lend itself to more stories, no pressure though ;) Interesting idea, John needs a slap and I love Rodney's comment at the end! Thanks :)

Author's Response: You're welcome, and thanks for commenting! I'm glad to know you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
18 Jul 2008 1:51 pm
I really enjoyed reading this story. A very plausible AU. I hope you will write more stories in this universe--after all, going to Atlantis is just the beginning!

Keep up the good writing!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I don't have any plans for a sequel now, but it could happen.
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