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Reviewer: WolfenMoondaughter (Signed)
13 Sep 2008 3:41 am
Being a Chicagoan living in Florida now, it was really nice to revist old haunts. *G* A little rushed, but sweet, and the sex was *hot* I am a little depressed about the time they spent apart, though. XD
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Reviewer: anoneemoose (Anonymous)
26 Jul 2008 4:36 am
It's an AU and yet it slips almost seamlessly into canon. I enjoyed it immensely, of course the Chicago setting didn't hurt either. (It takes me back to my old neighbourhood and haunts. Mmm, Mitchell's) :)
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Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
23 Jul 2008 4:49 pm
I really enjoyed this story. You captured J & R perfectly. And I LOVED the line, "Two great pleasures, sex and food circled Rodney's brain like a hamster on a wheel. If physics could somehow be worked into the evening, he'd stroke out and die." !!! ROTF&c!

Keep up the good writing!
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Reviewer: sgakaz (Signed)
23 Jul 2008 3:03 am
There were so many poignant and funny moments, and the loving was hot and in the end they found each other again, ah destiny :)
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Reviewer: Mystic (Signed)
23 Jul 2008 1:20 am
A bit bitter-sweet, but a lovely story, thanks for sharing and a good pre-rising story as well.
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Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
22 Jul 2008 8:16 pm
Loved the placement in Chicago! I live in Chicagoland and am I die-hard Cubbie fan. I enjoyed the characterizations, thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thanks! Can't you just imagine John singing along with Harry?
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Reviewer: katie_kibble (Signed)
22 Jul 2008 11:13 am
Mmmm, good, very good. Good plot =]
The only thing I have a problem with is the guy being called Kolya. The story more or less fits into the storyline of Atlantis which I love, but obviously the Kolya thing doesn't work.
Minor point though and I still really liked it =p

Author's Response: Tha nks for the feedback. As for the Kolya thing -- that's why it's an AU!
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