I could hear the rain, feel the warmth. Very romantic but not sappy.
Keep up the good writing!
Reviews For This is the wonder of devotion
Reviewer: Bad Wolf (Anonymous)
05 Aug 2008 10:39 pm
Aww, that was gorgeous and sweet. Thank you so much for sharing!
nothing like any other fic that I've read and liked - really rather stunning. The sex and almost poetic description are cleverly mingled. The dialogue surprisingly real and touching. I was quite moved by this, thank you
Hot, languid and sweet :). Very nice.
aww lovely way to spend a rainy day