Yay for the promotions (and for the new bed *g*). I loved how John shut the irritating colonel up :). I'm not sure what to make of the disclosure in terms of Atlantis. Will it work in their favour, with the higher ups not wanting to recall everyone once the population knows about the expedition? Or will it mean more interference from the higher ups wanting to be seen to be in charge of the city?
Laura.
Author's Response: Call it "all of the above." :D
Reviews For Into the Whirlwind
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
13 Aug 2008 6:01 am
Chapter 3 - Moments of Transition
Reviewer: Jon (Anonymous)
12 Aug 2008 12:09 pm
Awesome story. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Chapter 2 - Boldly Going and So Forth
Reviewer: tracy-thenaggingcubedone (Anonymous)
11 Aug 2008 1:33 pm
oh gawds this is wonderful please bring more to us fans now.
*snort* alien molesting koala *hahahahah*
very cool story. I've only ever liked one other au that had atlantis on its own but I might have a 2nd one now.
Author's Response: Thanks!
*snort* alien molesting koala *hahahahah*
very cool story. I've only ever liked one other au that had atlantis on its own but I might have a 2nd one now.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Chapter 2 - Boldly Going and So Forth
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
11 Aug 2008 12:18 pm
Poor John ::sniggers secretly::. I hope this find turns out to be the good news it seems to be.
Laura.
Author's Response: Yes. Poor John. You will be sympathetic if you know what's good for you.
Laura.
Author's Response: Yes. Poor John. You will be sympathetic if you know what's good for you.
Chapter 2 - Boldly Going and So Forth
Reviewer: Hexx (Anonymous)
10 Aug 2008 6:05 pm
That was cool - I like all the dramatic exit stuff. You write a lovely Shep/Lorne...
Looking forward to one consistant story though :P
Author's Response: Heh, yeah, consistent is nice.
Looking forward to one consistant story though :P
Author's Response: Heh, yeah, consistent is nice.
Chapter 1 - Point of Origin
Reviewer: Wind Wolf (Anonymous)
10 Aug 2008 5:25 pm
A very interesting start to what I hope will be a nice, long story. Thank you, WW.
Author's Response: It's already mostly finished and just needs beta'ed and reworked in some parts, and clocks in at about 65 thousand words.
Author's Response: It's already mostly finished and just needs beta'ed and reworked in some parts, and clocks in at about 65 thousand words.
Chapter 1 - Point of Origin
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
10 Aug 2008 2:54 pm
Intriguing start. They've certainly got a lot of work ahead of them, especially given that they've got to keep it hidden. Can they pull it off? Will it even be necessary?
Laura.
Author's Response: Yes, lots of work. As for your questions - maybe, possibly. :D
Laura.
Author's Response: Yes, lots of work. As for your questions - maybe, possibly. :D
Chapter 1 - Point of Origin
