Reviews For Lure

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Reviewer: radio_flyer (Signed)
24 Aug 2008 4:40 am
Wow! That was just ... wow! To bad they don't market shower heads like that!
Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
16 Aug 2008 5:58 am
Interesting prompt. I enjoyed the fic. I just love anything that that involves John and sex! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I hadn't even realized there were Atlantis/John prompts until I was examining the list and saw the lot of them... John goes with sex like sugar with chocolate, imo! :D
Reviewer: Char-sama (Anonymous)
14 Aug 2008 1:16 am
Ha! That was funny. XD Poor John.

Author's Response: However you enjoyed it, I'm glad you did!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
13 Aug 2008 12:32 am
Very interesting. I'm not sure about John's ending thoughts though. He seems like a control-freak with a laid-back facade. I think he would absolutely care about this experience enough to try and figure it out. Can you just see him trying to talk about it with Carson or Rodney? :-D

Thanks for the story!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review :) While I agree that John is quite the control freak, I think the key here is that he's not thinking clearly after such an experience. Maybe in an hour, when he's calmed down and less 'freaked out afterglow-y' and more 'what the HELL was that?!'-y' he'll head down to Rodney's lab and ask discretely if there's some secondary shower system and whether it can be disabled ;) I appreciate your insight, though!
Reviewer: La Chatte Noire (Signed)
12 Aug 2008 5:12 am
Hot. I love it when the city herself is written as sentient. And really, ten thousand years alone makes one a bit horny.

Author's Response: I'm a big fan of 'sentient city' fics but not as much of 'city manifested as human' fics, so I really enjoyed writing this one, because it got to be interactive in some ways without having that physical manifestation. Though, what I really mean is, thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it! Hehe.
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
11 Aug 2008 8:31 pm
O.O I want that kind of shower.

Author's Response: I know, right? Sign me up! (Thanks for the comment!)
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
11 Aug 2008 4:53 pm
Interesting idea. It was certainly hot, but also maybe a little creepy :).


Author's Response: Thank you! I was definitely going for creepy--because, who would John tell... and even if he did, how does one offer a sentient city disincentives? Heh.