I finally checked my aol account and found a notice that you'd posted a different story to WWOMB. I decided to come here to read it because the site is so much easier on my eyes - and not just cuz of my favorite Ronon pics. I'm glad I did because if I hadn't been wandering arround it might have been a really long time before I found this story.
McShep - together forever with plot: you guys are so good at that. Love the series and hope you keep coming back to it for a long time to come.
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Reviewer: gail (Anonymous)
21 Oct 2008 1:19 pm
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Reviewer: Louis17 (Signed)
01 Sep 2008 3:20 pm
OMG this is a fantastic series! Wow you guys are really talented, lol I like your version of the episodes way better than the actual ones! I hope you guys write more! lol i cant wait to see rodney ascend and c him walk away into the sunset with john, lol well I hope that happens.
thank youso much for the story and keep up the goodwork!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm sure that's exactly what will happen, john will just have to convince ROdney to do it!rnrnThanks again!
thank youso much for the story and keep up the goodwork!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm sure that's exactly what will happen, john will just have to convince ROdney to do it!rnrnThanks again!
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Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
29 Aug 2008 3:36 pm
I really enjoy this series; hope you will write more. A very good "improvement" of the original ep!
Keep up the good writing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Keep up the good writing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
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Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
28 Aug 2008 2:38 pm
Loved this! I really do love this series, too. Ah, I just need to pick a day where I can just sit down and reread everything. I loved this new addition!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you're still enjoying it!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you're still enjoying it!
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Reviewer: Jaessamine (Anonymous)
27 Aug 2008 8:07 pm
Yes, I like a protective and possessive John too :) Thanks for the update, I'm enjoying the series and hope there'll be more soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) Ori John may drive Rodney nuts at times but there is something about him... Mmmmm... I'm sure we'll start working on a new one in the near future too!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) Ori John may drive Rodney nuts at times but there is something about him... Mmmmm... I'm sure we'll start working on a new one in the near future too!
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Reviewer: sgakaz (Signed)
26 Aug 2008 10:49 pm
Hot! Scary for John who though he might lose Rodney but now knows one day they can have forever :) Sorry one little misake I think this should be: John's response was to transport them there and immediately pull Rodney into a tight embrace.
Author's Response: Whoops! LOL Yes, since Rodney's not a contortionist, that is what we meant. Thanks for pointing it out to us; we've fixed it now. And thanks for the feedback too. :) You just know John's going to be campaigning for Rodney to ascend now until he does it.
Author's Response: Whoops! LOL Yes, since Rodney's not a contortionist, that is what we meant. Thanks for pointing it out to us; we've fixed it now. And thanks for the feedback too. :) You just know John's going to be campaigning for Rodney to ascend now until he does it.
Author's Response: Whoops! LOL Yes, since Rodney's not a contortionist, that is what we meant. Thanks for pointing it out to us; we've fixed it now. And thanks for the feedback too. :) You just know John's going to be campaigning for Rodney to ascend now until he does it.
Author's Response: Whoops! LOL Yes, since Rodney's not a contortionist, that is what we meant. Thanks for pointing it out to us; we've fixed it now. And thanks for the feedback too. :) You just know John's going to be campaigning for Rodney to ascend now until he does it.
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Reviewer: hunterofshadow (Signed)
26 Aug 2008 8:03 pm
Absolutely love this series. Great addition! There's something about your protective john that makes me *squee*
Author's Response: Thanks so much, glad you're enjoying it (and this version of John)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, glad you're enjoying it (and this version of John
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