Reviews For Three Parts Living

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Reviewer: Azamiko (Signed)
23 Apr 2012 5:33 am
We all write/read plots like this because we like them, and yours is a more than fine example.
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Reviewer: bridgie0202 (Signed)
01 Sep 2008 10:50 pm
just so you apologies needed. You are more than welcome to remake this story as many times as you like. I have written Sheppard/Lorne coming together stories so many times it's ridiculous. Still, it holds my interest and the interest of my readers. Write what you like...

BTW, this was terrific. I really enjoyed it and would like to read more of what you write. :-)
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Reviewer: go suck on a lemon (Signed)
31 Aug 2008 4:52 am
It's a newish take, not done to death at all. I'm pretty sure this type of story is immortal. Loved your take on it. XD
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Reviewer: TDF (Signed)
30 Aug 2008 4:09 am
Well done and as others have said, no matter how many times the general plot might have been done, it's always nice to see another take. Especially since you not only showed Sheppard's feelings of guilt about what happened, but Ronon's as well - not to mention portraying Ronon as more than just a 'dumb brute'. Well done ;)
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Reviewer: kyna (Anonymous)
30 Aug 2008 4:03 am
No matter how many times people say it could have happened this way or that is still nice to know it did happen. Thanks for keeping it alive for us readers. Keep on writing.
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Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
30 Aug 2008 3:43 am
Yes, this story has been done to death, but people keep writing them, and people, like me, keep reading them :) I love first-times/revelations.

I enjoyed the talk with Ronon. Thanks for sharing!
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Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
30 Aug 2008 1:30 am
It's a very good story. :) And nicely done.
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