Loved it. Being a guy, I'm not quite as into the emotional/feelings aspects of the story, so I can't really comment on those parts (I didn't think it was overly so). I enjoyed the Elizabeth/Liz conversation - I would have liked to have seen a convo like that on the show.
I also liked how you made the turning point in their lives being the proposal from Simon, and that Elizabeth said 'no' but they still got back together.
Another thing I was pleased with was the section nearer the middle dealing with exactly why they had done it, and what Elizabeth meant to John/Rodney/Carson et al. It was true to the show, yet deeper and better thought out
Reviews For The Other Side
Reviewer: gateraid (Anonymous)
26 Oct 2008 1:38 am
Reviewer: Irony_rocks (Anonymous)
09 Oct 2008 1:24 pm
This is still my absolute favorite fic of yours. Period. (Unless, of course, you finish FBI fic. ;)
I do miss Elizabeth. Glad for the couples in both universes.
So imaginative and vivid--it really pulls you in! Great work.