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Reviewer: Formaldehyde (Signed)
16 Feb 2010 3:44 pm
It's so sad that all they'll ever do is watch and be watched. Great job, though.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!
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Reviewer: Sej (Signed)
22 Jan 2009 8:49 pm
Far be it from me to say this, but this story deserves a sequel. ;_; A guy can dream...

:3 Seriously, though. In all it's sadness, this still finds a way to be warm and sexy.

Hmmmmm. ...maybe if John took a little risk and displayed his affection a little two obviously (in a playful gesture, like teasing Rodney with a snack in the mess or the lab or something, offering it and then pulling it away just as Rodney reaches for it, forcing Rodney to lean into him and blush furiously, etc.), Rodney could be all 'hey buddy, if you get to do that, I'm totally going to pay you back sometime,' and when he knows John is watching him in the shower, he should open his eyes (out of lust-spite).

Because I'm willing to reckon that John wouldn't be able to tear his gaze away--even when Rodney steps out of the shower--and that could lead to all sorts of dangerously fun things neither of them ever intended to do.

O.o Weird review, I know. It's not often that I read a story and my story-continuation-fantasies kick in full force while I'm still on the page. :p I like your writing, though, and I think you've got a gift for one-shots.

Author's Response: Thank-you! What fantastic feedback :) rnI love the idea that you have story-continuation-fantasies (I have them too!) I like to think it means I've made the characters or the story-line 'alive' (if that makes sense!)rnI'm so thrilled you like my writing, I've only been writing for a few months, and it's great to know when I get things right.rnAs for a sequel....I have to admit, I've had niggling ideas for a follow-up...but we'll see!

Author's Response: Thank-you! What fantastic feedback :) rnI love the idea that you have story-continuation-fantasies (I have them too!) I like to think it means I've made the characters or the story-line 'alive' (if that makes sense!)rnI'm so thrilled you like my writing, I've only been writing for a few months, and it's great to know when I get things right.rnAs for a sequel....I have to admit, I've had niggling ideas for a follow-up...but we'll see!
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Reviewer: marlislash (Signed)
07 Dec 2008 12:48 pm
it's totally hot and so cute, poor john, damnit DADT (it's a shame this law) and sweet rodney who do what i can for his lover, bravo i'm enjoy this fabulous fic.

Author's Response: Thankyou. Yes, DADT is a bitch. And John is so lucky to have his creative Rodney. So glad you enjoyed it.
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Reviewer: Stardragon (Anonymous)
06 Sep 2008 7:38 am
Interesting. You manage the transition from the general watching to the specific very smoothly without giving us a hint of what is coming.

Author's Response: Thankyou. I'm new to writing and it's good to know when I get things right!
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
04 Sep 2008 12:56 pm
This was at once very hot and very sad. Here's hoping the rules turn in their favour eventually and they can be happy together at last.

Laura.

Author's Response: Thankyou. The American Military certainly need to get their act in order! Until then, I'm sure the boys will continue to find ways to get a measure of happiness.
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Reviewer: go suck on a lemon (Signed)
03 Sep 2008 1:07 am
Hot but sad, love it.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you love it. Thankyou.
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Reviewer: bubbysbub (Signed)
02 Sep 2008 10:32 pm
yay for posting!!! wonderful my darling, just wonderful. *hugs*
branny

Author's Response: Backatcha sweetie. Couldn't do this without you *hugs*
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Reviewer: sgakaz (Signed)
02 Sep 2008 10:30 pm
I don't know how something so sexy and hot can make me want to cry, but it dos, I say "to hell with the regulations" :)

Author's Response: So glad you liked it. Rodney's a creative guy, I'm sure he'll find other ways to skirt round those darned regs!
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Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
02 Sep 2008 7:54 pm
That was sad but sweet. They could have so much more if it wasn't for the regs. Thanks for the story.

Author's Response: Thankyou. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
02 Sep 2008 5:32 pm
Oh, wow. That's so heart breakingly sad. :( But, I guess as long as they can find that one way to be together like they can, it'll be ok.

Author's Response: Yeah, no one ever said love had to be happy *sniff* But I agree, the boys will be OK.
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