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Reviews For Lorne's Pain

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Reviewer: go suck on a lemon (Signed)
31 Dec 2008 3:30 am
Very nice way to wrap things up, props!
Dreams and Life
Reviewer: Hexx (Anonymous)
22 Oct 2008 2:16 pm
Glad to see more from you :)
Confusion, again
Reviewer: ellieangel1701 (Signed)
02 Oct 2008 4:10 pm
thats so sweet, that hes willing to wait till evans comfortable with things. this is brill cant wait for more

ellie
Reassurances
Reviewer: Mikey (Anonymous)
16 Sep 2008 5:45 pm
Very touching - I think letting Lorne struggle with his grief and the "betrayal" he's feeling towards John is being paced really well - you can't rush these things.
The Recording Device
Reviewer: ellieangel1701 (Signed)
14 Sep 2008 4:46 pm
thats great, its so touching you just want to hug him, well cam is and thats a start.
Cam strikes again
Reviewer: Hexx (Signed)
09 Sep 2008 4:14 pm
Well...when's the happy ending coming? I thought Cam was gonna take care of Lorne, not be a horny runt looking for a screw!

I'm liking the story, but I hate reading Lorne so unhappy :(
Fights and Innuendos
Reviewer: ellieangel1701 (Signed)
07 Sep 2008 5:35 pm
wow this is great i read chapter 2 and started crying its just so good, can't wait for the rest of this and i hope there will be some ....nice bits for evan .... cos he just needs a cuddle, and to be able to say goodbye properley.

cant wait for more

ellie
Mirages
Reviewer: Hexx (Signed)
05 Sep 2008 4:47 pm
Well this is just really sad :(

(In a good/touching way)

Author's Response: it will get better...it's not over. i rarely write unhappy endings. ;-)
The Recording Device
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