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Reviewer: Gold Berry (Anonymous)
19 Nov 2008 11:11 pm
For no apparent reason I decided to look through your stories to see if you ever wrote that sequel to Clava etc. pt. 1. And lo and behold! you did! Wonderful story, I love it. Now I eagerly await pt. 3 .... Please, don't take too long?
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
13 Sep 2008 6:00 pm
Great addition to the series; here's hoping the muse bites soon with ideas for part three!

I hope Carson finds a way to deal with the ATA-pain, or it's not going to be fun, especially for John. And it looks like John's going to need all the breaks he can get with Sumner so hostile and, as Carson thought, likely the rest of the marines following his lead.

I hope Carson can think of something, because I'm interested to see more of John interacting with Atlantis and seeing just where the connection can take them.


Author's Response: *toes and fingers crossed* I'm hoping the muse bites soon too! :D I have lots of ideas on what I want to happen and where to go with certain aspects of the storyline - whether that can be accomplished remains to be seen. I've laid a bit of the groundwork for where the ATA/Atlantis connection is heading - so hopefully that will addressed as well. Thanks for your kind words and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Reviewer: Karen /s (Anonymous)
12 Sep 2008 7:03 pm
This is a fascinating sets of stories. I think the best thing is that while we all know the canon of the series, you've taken it and made it your own. The characters are familiar, but the action is novel enough to keep it exciting and keeps me drawn me to the story.

Author's Response: thank you for your kinds words - I've mentioned before - I've been fascinated by Sheppard from the get-go and his uber ATA gene and his connection to Atlantis - to me it's felt as if TPTB dropped the ball on a fascinating aspect of the whole Ancient gene/Atlantis connection and this just made so much more sense - hopefully the muse and I can keep your interest :D
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Reviewer: ranlynn (Signed)
12 Sep 2008 2:56 am
Most excellent.

(tbc... What if Sheppard had to deal with the consequences of the military commander's animosity and learning to deal with all the Ancient tech as well?)

hmm...can't help wondering if the 'geek' contingent will rally around Sheppard.

Author's Response: thank yournrnand I'm certain the muse has more than a few ideas of the consequences of the probable animosity that Sheppard will experience ;)
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Reviewer: Kateri (Signed)
12 Sep 2008 2:16 am
OH my, this series is turning out to be very interesting. Eager for the next installment

Author's Response: I'm glad that you're enjoying it - the muse and I have some ideas for part three and we're currently kicking them around to see how they work out - so we'll see :D
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Reviewer: gail (Anonymous)
12 Sep 2008 1:22 am
You play what if wonderfully well.

Author's Response: thank you - it was something the muse was fascinated by and I've always felt that TPTB in the production/writing depts let the ball drop with the whole ATA gene and the connection to Atlantis and the Ancients
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