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Reviewer: Tori (Anonymous)
19 Nov 2008 9:36 am
Fantastic tag! Loved it, well done!
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Reviewer: Kim (Anonymous)
18 Oct 2008 5:37 am
That was wonderfully written. I felt my heart racing more and more as the story went on. I could certainly see that your experience leant a great deal of realism to the fic. Excellent work!
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Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous)
03 Oct 2008 8:30 pm
This is supposed to be a pg rated story. That means no f-words. Come on, your a good writer, you can put across a great story without cheapening it with language. The people on the show have honor and dignity and it should be reflected in your story.

Author's Response: Okay, I will concede and up the rating to PG-13. But I will beg to differ - these people are also military, and the show doesn't have them speaking as they should because it's prime time. I don't find them speaking realistically 'cheapening' the story with swearing. I am sorry you it took something away from the story for you, but I will still continue to present dialogue in a realistic manner.
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Reviewer: Sulien (Signed)
28 Sep 2008 3:56 am
Okay, please forgive me, but I'm not EVEN going to read this one. Your description of your seizure is enough to send me jibbering in terror, because that is my greatest fear: being trapped in an unresponsive body, completely paralized and powerless. You write just a little TOO well for me to want to read something of yours with that particular plot. *is totally creeped out at the mere thought*

Author's Response: Wow, um, I believe this is a first - someone not wanting to read the story but leaving a comment. I personally found the experience kinda, well, entertaining.
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