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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
24 Feb 2010 11:05 pm
Please keep writing this story. Most interested in reading it.
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
08 Dec 2009 1:19 pm
I'm intrested too, please post the rest of the story!
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Reviewer: pgs1961 (Signed)
05 Sep 2009 10:23 pm
please, please, please keep writing. I have got to know how this ends.
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Reviewer: pgs1961 (Signed)
01 Sep 2009 8:15 pm
this was great....when will the next chapter be posted?
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Reviewer: gail (Anonymous)
02 Apr 2009 4:09 pm
I was thrilled to see a WW x-over...thanks for sharing. I think it would be helpful for you to cull your ideas a bit -- your story includes some contradictory ideas which make it confusing (for example, in the beginning John's ex doesn't believe that aliens are real and thinks this is all a big joke, while later in the story she's toured and evaluated the SGC, therefore obviously knows what's going on). Perhaps you should should map out your story plan, make sure to give what you've written a second look (a day after you've written it, so you see it with fresh eyes), and also I would recommend you find a beta reader who can help with continuity errors and such. Please don't take this as a harsh criticism, just as a few tips for the best story you can write. Good luck!
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