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Reviewer: rubygirl (Signed)
28 Jan 2009 4:07 am
Nice characterization. The last line made me smile.
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
20 Nov 2008 9:53 am
Aww. Great characterisation for Ronon and John. I could really see them like that.

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Reviewer: radio_flyer (Signed)
20 Nov 2008 5:20 am
cute story. I like Ronon and Sheppard together because they're both alpha males and have that quirky sense of humor. My only suggestion is to make sure you grammar check before you post. I read through most of the errors, but it never hurts to let the computer attempt to tell you what it thinks your thinking.
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Reviewer: go suck on a lemon (Signed)
20 Nov 2008 3:41 am
Beautiful piece, you're a good writer.
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