Wraithbait

uh-oh

Author's Response: Hang on, Emely! wags, springwoof

*meep!* This is not good...surely Rodney isn't going to get implanted!?! And what about John?...Definitely a *meep* situation *nods*. Laura.

Author's Response: meep is right! wags, springwoof

Meep. Good updates, but I'm confused so I'm going to have to re-read the whole thing over. Not a chore at all, thankfully. :)

Author's Response: Sorry for the confusion. I'm playing with time a bit, doing flashbacks and flashforwards--so we're not quite being linear all the time in the story. my fault if that wasn't clear. very glad you're sticking with it, though! wags, springwoof

OH!....which pretty much sums things up, I feel ;). Just what can Klorel want with John and Rodney? And just how *will* Annie react when she comes round? I'm off to find out. Laura.

Author's Response: thanks for the comment, Laura. glad you're finding it exciting! wags, springwoof

Oh for cryin out loud those poor boys and Annie!!!

Author's Response: I know, sorry. And it will probably get worse before it gets better... Thanks for reading & thanks for the comment! wags, springwoof

Great to see some more familiar faces in Ford, Kawalsky, Martouf and Narim. I'm glad Martouf will be okay. I'm also glad that these people are eager to help John, Rodney and Annie get home. Just who is dialling in *now* though? Laura.

Author's Response: glad you're enjoying it! more soon

Interesting information on Daniel/Klorel this chapter. Some nice Teal'c/Sha,re interactions too. I can't wait to see who's coming through the gate. Laura.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked! wags, springwoof

Well, this is certainly turning out to be a very different universe, but it's fun now that they've found some nice people :). Can't wait to see what happens next. Laura.

Author's Response: Thanks for the nice comments, Laura! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. wags, springwoof

So is this the same universe as we saw earlier with Daniel volunteering as host? Laura.

Author's Response: Yes. You'll see more of him later...bwahaha! wags, springwoof

I'm glad this Sam didn't try to beat Rodney up. It was nice to see Jack and his sarcasm :). Laura.

Author's Response: I looove Jack....glad you do too! wags, springwoof

*meep* Daniel as Klorel! I can't wait to see what else transpires. Laura.

Author's Response: Didn't you want to see what kind of Goa'uld Daniel Jackson would make? wags, springwoof

This is great! Thanks for continuing with this series. It's amazing how real you write this AU. I really feel bad for "our" Rodney not having the relationship he wants with "his" John. Keep up the writing, it's inspired!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're continuing to read the series and that you're liking the way it's going...thanks for the nice comments! wags, springwoof

Yay! I'm so glad you're finally continuing this. This is an amazing and wild ride of a story.

Author's Response: ::grins:: I'm glad you're having fun! Thanks for letting me know, and for staying on the ride. wags, springwoof

I think I love you. Marry me?

Author's Response: Um, will sloppy doggie kisses be good enough? It's nice to be loved! thanks! wags, springwoof

More please

Author's Response: Ack! Working on it!! Truly. I've got the next (hopefully final) chapter underway. Tentatively titled: And Away We Go. The beginning is written, the end is all outlined, but the middle is fighting me....sigh. I'll probably post something else I'm working on first, though. sorry. Glad you liked the story. Thanks for the comment! wags, springwoof

AAAhh, go on writing this fabulous story right *fucking* now. You made me like something that looks like a spider! Incredible! And I really like Annie... Make with more McKay-Sheppard interaction!

Author's Response: Thank you for telling me you liked the story! It's nice that you like Annie -- it's difficult to make a hideous-looking alien appealing, let me tell you! So, I take it you'd like a sequel or something? Dunno if there *is* a sequel sitting around, but you folks dragged it out of me the last time....let's let it "cook" for awhile and we'll see...wags, springwoof

ahhh! interesting end! come on - what's this alternate reality like?? you're spinning a real plot-sink-hooker story here.

Author's Response: Thank you for commenting! lets me know my nefarious plan to leave you all on tenderhooks is working! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. wags, springwoof

that was great. I love this story. Cant wait for more.

Author's Response: So glad you liked it! am pleased you enjoyed. wags, springwoof

I'm so glad to see you're continuing this wild and exciting story. I thought the first part was intriguing, but the second just blew my mind! I can't wait to see what happens next. It's interesting how well McKay and the alternate universe Sheppard work together.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! *beams* wags, springwoof

Yay, part two :D! I love the interactions between John, Rodney and Annie. I'm beginning to see why this John is less confident than ours if his father was anything like General Maybourne! And is Rodney starting to see what the other Rodney sees in John? It was great to see some of these characters again, even if they were a little different than we're used to. And now Sam's a bloke? ::raises eyebrows:: Can't wait to see if anyone else has had a gender swap :). Oh, and I can't possibly not comment on Super Annie...I certainly wouldn't want to get on her bad side! Well, I look forward to part three. Laura.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I'm glad you caught that bit about AUJohn's dad. I wanted to give folks an idea of why he's so different than CannonJohn. ...And I think Annie's a lot like those big, fluffy dogs. All you can see are the big brown eyes and the waggy tail, & you don't realize they even *have* teeth until they use 'em.... Thanks for your comments! wags, springwoof