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Reviewer: Kayleefaye (Signed)
21 Jan 2009 8:43 pm
Way to go getting into his mind. You have kids, don't you?
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Reviewer: Kanetsidohi (Signed)
25 Nov 2008 5:05 pm
That was so sweet! Very good.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I just loved Torren in this episode.
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Reviewer: Laughing Magpie (Anonymous)
24 Nov 2008 11:14 am
This? This is adorable! Sweet and funny without being overly sappy. Add plausible and that's a tasty recipe for a successful story. Thank you for writing and sharing. Made my day.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Your review made MY day -
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Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
23 Nov 2008 10:04 pm
That was good and you can actually see that this would be a baby's thought processes. :)

Author's Response: Thank you - I'm glad it resonated with you.
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Reviewer: Chris10a (Anonymous)
23 Nov 2008 8:39 am
No use in me actually seeing this episode now, huh? You've covered all the important parts of it, I think. Very cute, very funny.

Author's Response: Well, babies may miss certain nuances - you might have to watch it to fill in the gaps.rnrnThanks for reading and commenting
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Reviewer: Zexmenia (Signed)
23 Nov 2008 4:24 am
Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks!
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