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Reviewer: NanaC (Anonymous)
30 Nov 2008 9:09 am
Hmm... ProtectiveLorne is awesome. I love this Chapter even more than the last! Keep up the great work! I love that pairing!

Author's Response: :D Thanks. I've got Chap 3 submitted for review & I'm off to write some more.
Chapter 2: Not Happening
Reviewer: Velvet mace (Anonymous)
29 Nov 2008 10:31 pm
I love this! I hope you continue working on it. There's something about the relationship between the scientists and the soldiers that protect them that I find really fascinating. It's like, you can't be that protective of someone without developing some sideways affection (and a bit of ownership) for them.

And man, do I have a kink for protective (and somewhat domineering) men. Oh Zelenka, Lorne will take care of you and all your needs.

Author's Response: ohmygod so do I. I totally have a kink for protective/dominance/ownership and now I'm inflicting it on all of you :P
Chapter 2: Not Happening
Reviewer: slash4femme (Signed)
29 Nov 2008 4:12 pm
ok so I usually don't leave feedback chapter by chapter but this chapter totally kicked ass and I just thought you should know. :~)
I'm really loving this story, and your characterization is lovely.

Author's Response: Wow. Thanks so much for the encouragement. You really know how to keep a writer motivated
Chapter 2: Not Happening
Reviewer: Gategurl (Anonymous)
27 Nov 2008 9:25 pm
I am loving this so far, please continue!

Author's Response: Thank-you, Thank-you! I'm having a blast with it so far :P
Chapter 1: Not Your Barbie Doll
Reviewer: slash4femme (Signed)
27 Nov 2008 1:55 am
ok this is very good. can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: *blush* I should just hold up a sign that says "Will write for feedback". Cuz its so true!
Chapter 1: Not Your Barbie Doll
Reviewer: Kanetsidohi (Signed)
25 Nov 2008 5:57 pm
Ok. I'm ready for the next chapter!

Author's Response: :) Thanks so for the feedback! I've submitted chap 2 for our lovely web angel's approval and am working on chap 3.
Chapter 1: Not Your Barbie Doll
Reviewer: go suck on a lemon (Signed)
25 Nov 2008 4:16 am
SQUEEEEE!!!!! Loev the pairing, and it's just so, so very in character! Brilliant!

Author's Response: Thanks :) I've always seen Lorne as a control freak & Z as a jitterbug. Hope you like the next chap!
Chapter 1: Not Your Barbie Doll