Reviews For Beer on the Pier

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Reviewer: Jantique (Signed)
02 Dec 2008 5:17 pm
I really enjoyed this story. You capture both Rodney's and John's vulnerabilities perfectly.
P.S.: You forgot to drop Keller OFF the nearest pier!

Keep up the good writing!
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Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
29 Nov 2008 10:01 pm
Soft and warm. Very good. :)

Author's Response: Thank you!
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Reviewer: Becs (Signed)
29 Nov 2008 4:41 pm
This is so good but I still can't get Keller out of my head! Grrrr!

Author's Response: Ugh! Me either. It's amazing to me how she's become such a pivotal character this season. The writers, they have failed us!
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Reviewer: Alinea (Signed)
29 Nov 2008 3:37 pm
Yup, that's just what I thought when I saw that final cut away shot. That hand jus snaking nearer. Great.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I think more a move of possession than anything else - just wanting to be close - because I don't think John would take advantage of Rodney under those circumstances.
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