Reviews For Discontinuity

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Reviewer: Ansku (Signed)
19 Feb 2009 5:24 pm
Brilliant :)

Author's Response: Thank you!
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Reviewer: spacepirate42 (Anonymous)
13 Jan 2009 11:05 am
Cam/John is my favorite crossover pairing, but there isn't a whole lot of fic out there for these two. This is wonderful. I loved your characters and the little changes you made still managed to fit well into the canon storyline. I particularly enjoyed the bits about John, Cam and Lorne's past shenanigans, and how in sync Cam and John are with each other.

Looking forward to the next installment!

Author's Response: Thank you!
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Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
12 Jan 2009 7:39 pm
*wearing very sheepish grin* Oops. Apparently this is a series. I will recall my previous ranting review until after having read the next installment.

Wasn't story 3 posted before the first two??

Author's Response: It was, but timeline-wise it fits after the first two. Basically it was a little thing that bubbled up while just as I started writing this fic. I wrote it for the flashfic amnesty and since it stood alone went ahead and posted it instead of waiting. *shrug* Sorry about any confusion.
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Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
12 Jan 2009 7:37 pm
No, no, no!! You are not allowed to do this! What did Thor want to discuss about Cam??? You had damn well better have a sequel or epilogue planned, or I'm gonna bust a gut! Not to mention, what did Cam do to change things?

I greatly enjoyed the fic. I adore Cam/John. Thanks so much for sharing.

Author's Response: Heh heh. I'm afraid exactly what's up with the Asgard is going to be revealed at a later point. Suffice to say that Cam tried to do a good deed and it may or may not bite him in the ass. Well, not him - au!him. There's actually a couple hints as to what he did on Earth, which were fairly minor up to this point (which was, to say that least, not what original-Cam expected). In Part 2, Cam jokingly admits he can 'see the future', and Part 5 mentions the Crosstime Guide to Dating John. It's probably best not to think about what kind of regs he's violating by not turning that in....
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Reviewer: Andy (Anonymous)
12 Jan 2009 2:30 pm
Is there not a reveal about the asgard thing?
Great story thot!!!

Author's Response: The Asgard thing will be expanded upon in later fics.
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Reviewer: AliCat (Anonymous)
12 Jan 2009 9:36 am
I'm not a big fan of Mitchell / Sheppard - partly because long distance relationships suck - and not in the good way. This almost made me change my mind. I think if there had been more of it it might have.

Landry and O'Neill were very nicely done.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading anyways!
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Reviewer: crazywriter10 (Signed)
12 Jan 2009 1:54 am
Absolutely wonderful. I loved it. :]

Author's Response: Thank you!
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