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Reviewer: AliCat (Anonymous)
25 Jan 2009 4:34 am
I was torn between feeling sorry for John and horrified by McKay.

OMG. I laughed so much I snorted water through my nose. Good thing I managed to miss the keyboard. ;)

Author's Response: McKay was blundering a lot, wasn't he? Well, at least John knows what he's getting into now? And I'm glad I made you laugh! I'm not always very good at humor, so I'm very happy it worked. :)
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Reviewer: adafrog (Anonymous)
25 Jan 2009 3:23 am
Awesome. Gonna be more, right??

Author's Response: maybe! My muse might need a kick in the butt after a while, but there will probably be something more to at least get them through the gate. :) No promises though!
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Reviewer: ladyholder (Signed)
25 Jan 2009 12:06 am
This was very nice. I am glad that things didn't immediatly work out both of them, they had to work for it. Also, why do I have a feeling that Daddy Sheppard is going to cause problems?

Author's Response: thank you! I love to put the boys through all sorts of trouble ;) As for Daddy Sheppard... well, I haven't heard anything from him yet, but I'm certain something will be coming through soon!
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Reviewer: Becs (Signed)
24 Jan 2009 11:45 pm
lol. I loved Mitchell in this. :o)

Author's Response: thanks!
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