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Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
10 May 2009 6:03 am
I lobed this. The ancient chatter reminded me a bit of latin.

I loved the way that Cam reacted to. It was fun.

I also liked the way that John seemed to really let go as he was talking in this strange language. Tho I thought his description of General Landry was more than a little harsh.

Thanks for a great add to this series.

Author's Response: It is Latin, actually. Grammatically correct, too.
Chapter 9
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
04 Apr 2009 3:05 am
Ahahaah. Loved this one. :D

Author's Response: Thank you!
Chapter 9
Reviewer: Domino (Signed)
12 Mar 2009 4:30 am
Oh yes!! I loved this chapter! I wish you'd show the action, though... *wink wink*

Author's Response: Heh. Sorry, it was a comment fic and so there wasn't a lot of room.
Chapter 7
Reviewer: Domino aka: ninja007 (Anonymous)
27 Jan 2009 8:49 am
Oh, I loved this chapter. Very dark, but still lovely. Well written.

Loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you!
Chapter 5