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Reviewer: bridgie0202 (Signed)
11 Mar 2009 12:13 am
this has the potential to be a intro to a fantastic story!! it is good on it's own, but there's so much left in lorne's story here, in the pre-existing relationship between shep and lorne. i like it.
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Reviewer: Cammy (Anonymous)
12 Feb 2009 2:03 pm
Please, this can't be the end!!!
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Reviewer: go suck on a lemon (Signed)
09 Feb 2009 6:31 pm
There must be more! Please! It's wonderful, definitely potential for both sequels and prequels.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. I'm not sure if there will be more. I was kind of testing the waters so to speak, as this was my first. But with the positve feedback i might just have to oblige. Thanks for taking the time to review.
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Reviewer: Pipa (Anonymous)
09 Feb 2009 2:07 am
For a first time this was awesome. I really liked it.
Also it begs for a kind of prequel leading to this Story!
Thank you!

Author's Response: I'm thinking about a prequel but i'm not sure. Thanks for the review
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Reviewer: PJ (Anonymous)
08 Feb 2009 1:03 pm
Great story. I would love the know the back story to this.

Author's Response: Thanks so much :)
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Reviewer: Dylaila (Anonymous)
08 Feb 2009 8:17 am
I liked it, hope you write more.

Author's Response: Thanks
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