Very moving :(
Also, as a side note you may want to fix a few things, you have the words in the wrong way at the begining and you are missing at least one word further down. I say because I care ;)
Author's Response: Thank you. I'll see what I can do to fix it. ;o)
Reviews For The Answer
Reviewer: Time & tide (Anonymous)
12 Jul 2009 4:36 am
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Reviewer: Kanetsidohi (Signed)
09 Mar 2009 12:41 pm
WOW That was so powerfull. Great work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. This fic has had some mixed reviews. I'm glad you liked it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. This fic has had some mixed reviews. I'm glad you liked it.
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Reviewer: Jaessamine (Anonymous)
17 Feb 2009 3:33 pm
Very well written and so so sad! Thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you :o)
Author's Response: Thank you :o)
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Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
15 Feb 2009 5:24 pm
So sad and in so few words.
Author's Response: I know, I was in a really depressing mood when I wrote it. :o(
Author's Response: I know, I was in a really depressing mood when I wrote it. :o(
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