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Reviewer: (Anonymous)
11 Apr 2009 5:13 am
Can't wait for more of this.
It is an intersting premise sounds like the destruction might confine them in the milky way for a while also given the fact the Ancient base had three ZPM's and is big I'm wondering if it is another CIty like Atlantis as I doubt they had only one we know at least to went to Pegasus but given the plague devastating the population and the Ancients tendacy to leave their toys scattered over the playground if it was damaged they might have keft it behind. They only other thing it might be is that it was built after they came back before they ascended or possibly Janus we never did find out abut him only that he went back and forth in the timeline if that planet which was weird doesn't really sound like Janus and with Moros deascending to becom Merlin I can easily see another ship being made given their worries about the Ori

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Reviewer: Kayleefaye (Signed)
26 Mar 2009 5:07 pm
I read the first chapter and I'm already like OMG WTF???? Great writing. Keep it up
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Reviewer: Namida (Anonymous)
26 Mar 2009 5:15 am
I'm really liking this so far I gotta say. One thing really threw me though, when Hammond and Hayes are talking about the damage report as it were, Ontario? Is a province, not a city. Sorry but it bothers me as I am nit picky and Canadian :P Not a big thing just putting it out there...
Other than that, great story so far!
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Reviewer: gail (Anonymous)
19 Mar 2009 3:24 am
Intense. I'm really going to have to let this sink in, then come back and read it again.
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Reviewer: Nightstorm (Anonymous)
16 Feb 2009 2:58 am
Wow! Just Wow! What an incredible opening chapter!!!!You are weaving a really complex story. I am really looking forward to the next part!
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