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Reviewer: bridgie0202 (Signed)
03 Mar 2009 5:37 pm
the story wasn't dying...it was becoming complex. there was a moment there when you could have taken this and turned it into a long story with several interwoven story lines. this is good. you're doing a good job. keep writing. :-)

Author's Response: thank you! i feel better about this story now :-) i'm working on a sequel to this story, but it might take me a while to et it up; the computer it's on is broken. but there will be more! by the way, what part did you think could have spring-boarded a long, intricate story? just wondering. anyways, thanks for the review! :-)
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Reviewer: wraithqueen1 (Signed)
01 Mar 2009 6:57 pm
Hey, good story idea. Micheal definitely needs a little savin. It did move a little quick but I think that with the angle you stopped the story at, it could easily be picked up and continued. Allowing Ava to develop through the information she received and find out if she truly can love someone so different. I would like to see more of this story.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review :) I'm glad that you like it. I am trying to continue it, so with any luck it will come out okay and I'll put it up soon. I'll try to explore their relationship a little deeper as the next story progresses. rn
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