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Reviewer: anon2 (Anonymous)
22 Mar 2009 9:38 am
great start, can't wait to read the rest. Already liking your character and from what you have already said about him, he seems a perfect match for our beloved Colonel.
Reviewer: anon (Anonymous)
19 Mar 2009 8:21 pm
Excellent start. I normally wait until a story is done but the idea was so good I had to dive in. More soon I hope!
Reviewer: NC (Anonymous)
19 Mar 2009 7:51 pm
Very nice start so far. I enjoyed the first Chapter very much.
More, more... soon! ;)
Reviewer: CSD0484 (Anonymous)
19 Mar 2009 7:38 pm
Ok I am so loving your story already, hope to read more soon!!