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I thought the plot to Cypher was interesting but the film itself was boaring (except David's part) and five mintues at the end. I think you adding Rodney/John helped ten fold and the way you handled the dreams as explination was so much better than the film had and your ending was much, much better. Thanks for a good read.

Author's Response: I love hearing I've improved on a script! Thanks so much for letting me know you liked it! :-D

I really enjoyed the story and I enjoyed the movie espesically David's bit. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for letting me know you enjoyed it! :-D