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Reviewer: amandasnow (Signed)
16 Apr 2009 2:16 am
Very nice job with this story. It was a little difficult to understand in the beginning. Not a happy story but certainly a thought provoking one. I love the idea of all the disparate characters brought together in one story. I also have toyed with the idea of evolution of wraith and would like to see your take on that one. But all in all in a fabulous story. Better than 95% of those I've read. It was intelligent and the dialogue true to the characters. Thank you for giving us a new version of the old Michael and Teyla story as well as adding Todd and a elder wraith queen into the mix. I've always thought that with tens of thousands of years to play with that there should be a hierarchy of age with the wraith, especially the Queens. Thank You for your story. I enjoyed it immensely and couldn't stop reading it once I started.

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I assume you did read Enmity and Mantle before this one? (it being the third of a 'three-parter'?) Still thank you again. The hierarchy will continue to be explored through the rest of the series.
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