Reviews For Confidence of Tomorrow
Reviewer: \(^o^)/ (Anonymous)
04 May 2009 11:11 am
I absolutely 'loved' the ending! (I'm such a hopeless romantic, lol) You did very well and it was perfect in my view
Awwww. Poor boys. How we love to hurt them but then we give them cuddles. Good story.
The over all story made a good read. I did feel there were some plot holes though, like: if they had limited time to gate, but had time to tell Atlantis there was a problem and still look, Atlantis could have sent a jumper w/ winter gear and Marines to help search as anyone lost out there would be in serious trouble. Also, if Rodney was injured, showing signs of hypothermia as you said and fell alseep, even if in a cold cave, soaked to the skin with other injuries, I hightly doubt he'd wake up and if he did, there would be no trek...what happened to the life sign detector or the subque? You needed to address these a bit better. Glad to see it worked out and that Rodney found the courage to speak up. Thanks for sharing, don't get discouraged and please, keep writting. :>)