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Reviewer: Mystic (Signed)
01 Apr 2009 9:47 am
Wow, what an amazing story. I first thought you'd get caught up on your original characters, but you blanaced it out nicely and I shaw how things changed and the emotions you brought out during the adventure. I loved the ending and how it worked out and how things were open for a bigger better future, great job. Thank you for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you for this really wonderful review. I truly appreciate you reading the story and letting me know what you thought of it. :) Thank you for taking that time! It means a lot!
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Reviewer: Danny (Anonymous)
29 Mar 2009 4:19 pm
This is my second attempt at sending a review - I did not read the number correctly apparently the first time. If I don't read it right this time then I wont bother again. My eyesight is crap anyway, and though I would love to always send a review, unfortunately I have only ever succeeded about three times in actually doing so, and I have no idea why a security code is necessary anyway - nuff said. Do I loved the way you wrote this story, especially the fact that it continues on nicely from the end of the series on TV. All the characters were well written and thoroughly believable and the theme was well thought out. Thank you so much for giving me such a good read, and it is lovely to see that so many fans are continuing on with the stories even though the series itself is over. In some ways this is a good thing, because at least we can now take the "continuing series" in whichever direction we choose - without having to keep one eye on where the "official" writers are taking the boys, which may not be where we want them to go - ie Dr Jennifer Keller and the thought that we might have had to endure Rodney and her getting married etc etc.I think perhaps it ended right where it should have done. Thank you once again for a truly great read.

Author's Response: Aw, man, thank you so much for all the trouble you went through to post this really great review. I really truly appreciate it. :) It means so much to know that people read the story and enjoyed it. Thank you for reading, for taking the time to let me know what you thought, and for your very kind words. I'm glad that you liked it so much! I feel like I won a prize! :) Thanks!
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Reviewer: Amandasnow (Anonymous)
29 Mar 2009 1:48 am
This was a lovely story considering I generally don't like slash and bypass those parts. The rest of the story was intriguing enough to keep my attention. I even liked the the love story between McKay and John. The character's voices were real enough as was the interaction between then. You took all this time to write a great story and deserve cudos. Good Job!

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you for letting me know that you enjoyed the story! I'm especially pleased that you liked it even though you are not typically a slash fan. That's awesome. And thank you for taking the time to read it and for leaving a review. It is awesome to know that people read it and liked it. THANKS!
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Reviewer: sgakaz (Signed)
27 Mar 2009 8:09 pm
This is a really great story, and I'm glad Addie forgives hers for sending her here and our ones are grateful to her for being the catalyse to giving them both who they really loved :)

Author's Response: Thank you such lovely feedback! :) I'm glad that Addie was able to forgive, too, and that she found the right kind of home for herself. :) Thank you! I can't tell you how much I appreciate you reading and letting me know your thoughts!
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Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
26 Mar 2009 1:37 am
This is a wonderful story and Addie is definitely a McKay. :)

Author's Response: Oh, wonderful! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!
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Reviewer: gail (Anonymous)
25 Mar 2009 11:45 pm
Thanks for putting the flashback at the top.

Author's Response: Oh, interesting. The way that this site made me break up the story is different than the other places I've posted it. So, Chpt 1 would not have the flashback within it...I see now why you were confused. Hopefully the story will answer your questions as you read it. :) It's long and takes its time in some respects.
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Reviewer: gail (Anonymous)
25 Mar 2009 11:36 pm
Intriguing. You have some great interactions and bits of dialog.

But I ended the chapter with - And why aren't they on Atlantis?

Author's Response: *confused* Did you see the series finale? This takes place after that. Also, in the first chapter, which I believe you're resonding to, they talk about why they are at Cheyenne Mtn. Rodney is there analyzing Wraith equipment, and John, Teyla, & Ronon are summoned there after the first unscheduled dial in with McKay's IDC. The story is long and is complete. Most, if not all, of the questions that you might have will be answered within the story itself -- I hope!
Chapter 1