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Reviewer: datawolf39 (Signed)
31 Aug 2012 10:41 pm
i love this story!!! speially the end and every part where Rodney calls him Pet. i couldnt stop smiling as i was reading this cause it was so awesome to *see* John so submissive. i had always wondered what happened in those 700 years. Long live the McShep ^_^
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Reviewer: Fairyglass (Signed)
25 Aug 2011 12:01 am
Oh. Oh, oh, oh. I came across this completely by random and I am SO GLAD I did.

Now, admittedly, you hit several of my buttons all at once: Rodney slash John, Dom!Rodney & Sub!John, training/teaching themes.... mmmm.

Your attention to detail is delicious and the slow build wonderful. There is realization and then there is acceptance and then there is wanton reveling, all of which is just brilliant!

I admit I was a little thrown by the AI Atlantis. I'm never really a fan of that trope, but since you didn't go overboard with it, it was more of a niggle then a deal breaker.

And I was SO RELEAVED when Real Rodney accepted John in the last chapter. I have absolutely nothing against McKeller, but... yeah. McShep is the SGA ship I sail on. ;}

Thank you so much for this! Adding to my favs and recommending it to several friends!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this. It's one of my favorites. rnrnWhile I believe that the city is more than 'just a city', I was a bit surprised at the appearance of Sentient!Atlantis myself.
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Reviewer: velocitygrass (Signed)
14 Mar 2011 9:44 pm
This was wonderful. I really enjoyed how greatly John came to love that Rodney took care of him and how much pleasing his Master affected him. He was so adorable.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I really enjoyed getting into John's head for this one.
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Reviewer: Sej (Signed)
06 Apr 2009 1:15 am
I was just combing through the recent updates for something new when I noticed that no one has left a review for your story!

I'm sorry that I didn't do that when I read it--honestly, I enjoyed it a lot and even sent it to a friend of mine who likes to submit (although he calls his mistress "Princess"). Honestly, this was very thorough and engaging, and it struck me as true-to-BDSM-life, so to speak.

Actually, it was so good that I laughed when I realized that he is into women and that this pairing wouldn't appeal to his interests for that reason. >.>;; Or maybe I'm so deep in my gay little world that I forget that other preferences exist.


Nice job, seriously. As I read, I felt so immersed that when John was being punished and feeling anxiety over abandonment, I was, too, and the times that Rodney soothed him left me feeling comforted, as well.

The relationship between them progresses both slowly and steadily, and it amounts to a kind of torturous bliss. I recommend this story to anyone who is interested in learning a little more about the dom/sub lifestyle, and anyone who loves to see John be so cute.

So again--great job. Thanks, mate.

Author's Response: I'm glad you loved it. Feel free to recommend this to anyone.
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