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Reviewer: CF (Anonymous)
13 Nov 2009 4:19 am
This was great! You have a lot of talent! I could really feel the pain he was going through. And the characters were spot on. You have got to write more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm delighted the story touched you so.
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Reviewer: rubygirl (Anonymous)
14 Apr 2009 1:08 pm
I love this. The dialog is so good and true to the characters, and you make my heart ache for Ronon. I'm sure John will make it all better ... eventually.

Author's Response: Oh, he will, trust me. ;-) Thanks for the kind words, sweetie. Your thoughts mean worlds to me!
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Reviewer: Nu (Anonymous)
12 Apr 2009 11:23 am
very touching

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm delighted you think so.
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