Reviews For Elemental
This was incredible! I think that I reviewed this story on FFN too, but I figured that I might as well review it here. I love this story so much; you have an inredible, incredible talent; and this is just absolutely perfect for Teyla. I bow to your excellence, and I hope that there is more like this in the near future.
I really like this story. I think my favorite line is: "It said something about his day job that Evan's next thought was that there had to be some alien hiding in the club and Mitchell was under cover." This line totally made my day. Anyway, I really like your writing and I am looking forward to reading more of your work.
Reviewer: Rinter (Anonymous)
30 Apr 2009 9:24 pm
This is a fantastic story. It is really easy to visualize every move you described. It is refreshing to see a story written about Teyla's more violent side. I loved the little bit with John and Ronon and the ass kicking, it made me laugh. Anyway great story!
Reviewer: luvsciencegeeks (Anonymous)
28 Apr 2009 4:35 pm
You absolutely nailed Teyla with this one. And you must have children. You really express the dichotomy that us moms face. We love our children, but sometimes need time for the things we enjoy. I also love the way you portray John and Ronon. I love this story, and I needed a good, quick read today. Excellent work--thanks for sharing!