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Reviewer: Tamda (Anonymous)
05 Jul 2009 4:10 pm
Love this. It says love more than a NC-17 smutlet.
Way more.

It's like having my better half give me her special cup, her no touchie under pain of death cup, full of hot broth, before work when I'm sick. I see it and know she loves me. Weird, but that's exactly what this feels like.

The John scene more than anything. The stillness. The confidance and power of the weight, the feel of Ronin's pride, love, power, the feel of Ronin, makes him complete and satisfied.

Love that.
Love this. Please do keep it up!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! rnrn(And the no-touchie-under-pain-of-death cup had me laughing, by the way. :D )
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Reviewer: Lisa B. (Anonymous)
18 Jun 2009 10:19 am
BRAVO!!! Very well written! Love how observent both Rodney and Teyla are whithout really clueing in. Very beleavable.

Author's Response: Thank you, and thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it!
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Reviewer: go suck on a lemon (Signed)
29 May 2009 1:54 am
Nice slice of life, excellent writing as well.

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it!
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Reviewer: jersey_trash2534 (Signed)
25 May 2009 9:06 pm
Very good! It made me giggle.

Author's Response: Thanks- That's what I was going for. :)
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Reviewer: joey (Signed)
24 May 2009 10:52 pm
This is off to a good start. Objects of personal exchange are similar to objects of exchange in marriage, where no rings are involved.

Keep going and well done.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Unfortunately, I think I've set this up as kind of a one-shot, but who knows when the muse will strike again? :)
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