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Reviewer: yellaveth (Anonymous)
25 Jul 2009 12:32 am
That was cool! Really! I wonder why people write so little about Todd and John. I think it is just obvious there's something between them!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I agree with you, but y'know, there's no way there'd ever be anything like a Romance between them. It would have to be a somewhat sick and twisted relationship, and there's not a big audience to read that, is there?
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
01 Jun 2009 7:51 am
I can certainly sympathise with John's feelings; this was hot in a creepy way ;). It was intriguing how in sync they were, like a well oiled machine. I could hear them saying the words, too- you really caught the characters. I hope you might write that 'next time' Todd seemed so happy about.


Author's Response: Thanks so much for saying you felt I caught the characters, Laura! That made me really happy. And I'm glad to hear that the rest of it resonated with you exactly as I'd hoped: hot, but in really creepy way... You made my day! sw
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