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Reviewer: jd (Anonymous)
26 Sep 2009 9:03 am
Ugh for 1 I highly doubt they would have just left the rest of those slaves behind I KNOW they would not have left the other Jumper there to be found.

Author's Response: That's the beauty of a story. I never said that no one came back for the Jumper. As for leaving the planet behind... didn't they leave Hoff behind? Or Orren's planet? Olesia? It's the same thing, other than it being the right tactical decision...
Chapter 1
Reviewer: caprilyeous (Signed)
18 Sep 2009 1:33 am
Absolutely loved this... This was my first Sheppard/Lorne fic(usually it's Sheppard/McKay for me) and let me say you converted me!I loved the UST that filled every page of this story. You made me feel very emotion John and Evan felt. It was so imtimate and senual, and the final scene was both HOT! and sweet fluff. Thank you for giving me a very entertaining night! I am off to see what other stories you have to offer and other Sheppard/Lorne fics as well!!

Author's Response: Thank you! For me it's a lovely present for new year to recieve such an enthusiastic review, and I'm very happy that I've converted you. McShep is nice, but Sheppard/Lorne is by far better, because of both the frat regs and the gays in the army issue. Unfortunately I'm a little stuck with my other Lorne/Sheppard stories since my beta is unavailable, so I'm afraid that you'll have to wait for more... ;))
Chapter 1
Reviewer: Indus (Anonymous)
28 Aug 2009 8:38 am
I loved this, the pairing, the progression, the very hot ending...

Thanks for posting!

Author's Response: I'm happy you enjoyed it! :D
Chapter 9
Reviewer: go suck on a lemon (Signed)
25 Aug 2009 11:35 pm
Epic WIN!

Author's Response: Indeed! :)
Chapter 9
Reviewer: ellieangel1701 (Signed)
20 Aug 2009 5:22 pm
cool loved it, glad we had a happy ending.

ellie

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm a fan of happy endings, so you won't find many tragedies in my stories... :)
Chapter 9
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
18 Aug 2009 1:26 pm
Yay, lovely ending, and about time too! *g* It took a long time for then to get out of the infirmary and heal enough to get a clean bill from Keller, but they got there in the end. I'm glad their argument wasn't too long, or too harsh. They both made good points, but Evan made sense and I'm glad John saw it. And that ending was incredibly hot!

Laura.

Author's Response: Thank you very much :D
Chapter 9
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
18 Aug 2009 1:00 pm
*Phew* That was nerve-wracking as each thing went wrong! Glad to see John and Evan made it, if not quite in one piece. Looks like their date will have to be postponed until they've been cleared by Keller, though :(.

Laura.
Chapter 8
Reviewer: speciallaura (Anonymous)
17 Aug 2009 4:24 am
That was one hell of a hot ending. I hope you continue wrighting, especially Lorne/Sheppard.

Author's Response: Thank you. I've already wrote two other stories for Sheppard/Lorne and all I need is to beta-read them. I have a wonderful beta but she doesn't know the show and I think I've overwhelmed her with the science-babble. So wait for it! :)
Chapter 9
Reviewer: parmakai66 (Signed)
17 Aug 2009 1:03 am
great ending!! Loved the hot sex! Caldwell giving Lorne ice chips cracked me up. Can't wait for your next story

Author's Response: Thank you! ;) And yeah, I have a special liking for Caldwell too...
Chapter 9
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
16 Aug 2009 9:25 pm
HOT DAMN.
Now THAT is an fucking hot and happy ending. :D

I APPROVE and I love it and oh, it's favorite'd.

Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Chapter 9
Reviewer: kata (Anonymous)
13 Aug 2009 9:00 pm
wow totally love this story . like your characterisations and that Lorne really gets Sheppards quirks and can handle his moods ...can't wait til the next chapter but at the same time don't want it to be over *g*

Author's Response: Thank you, and I'm really happy that you liked my characterisations, since I've worked really hard on it. I hope that I can publish my other two Sheppard/Lorne stories soon, so that you can read more! :D
Chapter 1
Reviewer: ellieangel1701 (Signed)
12 Aug 2009 5:25 pm
please please please tell me there will be more i love this story and was hooked from the get go, please say there will be more and soon. cant wait for more

ellie

Author's Response: Fisrt of all - there will be more. The last chapter in this story will be published this Satureday,so you can be calm. And I'm very happy you liked the story so far! :)
Chapter 8
Reviewer: go suck on a lemon (Signed)
12 Aug 2009 2:00 am
This is so amazingly intense!

Author's Response: Thank you. I try my best ;)
Chapter 8
Reviewer: Pipa (Anonymous)
09 Aug 2009 10:30 pm
Very well written, I hope they're both ok and Shepperd isn't mad at Lorne for hesitating.

Author's Response: I think you just hit the heart of it. And will he be angry or not, or will they be alright or not, will be revealed in the next and final chapter :)
Chapter 8
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
08 Aug 2009 8:26 pm
Oooooh, I hope they'll both be okay! D:

Author's Response: Mmm... you'll see... :)
Chapter 8
Reviewer: parmakai66 (Signed)
08 Aug 2009 2:12 am
I love this story ... but just one tiny nitpik ... there's no way Lorne could jump headfirst into the water. I think you captured the pain he would have felt pretty good, but at that height, he would have surely broken his neck. The coast guard jumps from their helos at 15-20 feet, feet first. I know its scifi ...

Author's Response: The thing was, I didn't have any other reference point about water jumps. I don't know how it sounded like, but I really don't have the first clue about diving or swimming. My only thought was that there were crazy people who jumped into water from really high cliffs and miraculously stayed alive, but I never could remember their names or the places they were at. I'll go work on that in a few days, and really thanks for the comment! :)
Chapter 8
Reviewer: NanaC (Anonymous)
08 Aug 2009 1:54 am
Please, I beg you, make us not wait another week. -I can't wait anymore. It was hard enough to wait for this chap.

I loved it, loved Lorne very much in this, and McKay way very in carakter. -> "So you're naked?" he asked...
Awesome!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, but I'm afraid that the next chapter - that would also be the last - will be published only next Saturday :) I'm happy that you liked this one!
Chapter 8
Reviewer: Twinfetish (Signed)
08 Aug 2009 1:38 am
Bloody awesome chapter! I loved the action, and the confusions, and Lorne was great.

I liked that he was hurt, but not horribly, I also like Sheppard's entrance in the end.

ConCrit:

Now take out the thrid crystal from the right from the second row and insert it into the empty slow at the fifth row

Should be third crystal, and empty slot not slow.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, and of course you're right. I'm running off to fix it :))
Chapter 8
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
03 Aug 2009 8:25 pm
Well, if their night had to be ruined, at least it was by something suitably urgent! I can't help being impressed with the wraith disguise and probable plan, even as it's scary to know just how close it came to succeeding.

It's a dangerous plan they've cooked up to stop the wraith, so I hope they all make it out in one piece and that John and Evan get to pick things up where they left off.

Laura.

Author's Response: Thank you for the reviews. :) I'm happy that you like the story so far, and hopeful that your questions will be answered by the end of it. Ans yes, the Wraith are a very smart race, and I hope that by the end of the story everyone will be able to guess who's behind the current impending doom :)
Chapter 7
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
03 Aug 2009 7:57 pm
o/ FINALLY!!!!

I'm glad Radek was such a good friend at the start of this chapter. He got Evan thinking from a different place just in time for John's patience to snap. That was an intense confrontation, but I'm glad it got them both to confess their feelings and decide to go for it. I like that they're taking it slow and it was nice seeing them relaxing together.

I wonder what Rodney wants them to look at?

Laura.
Chapter 6
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