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Reviewer: go suck on a lemon (Signed)
07 Jul 2009 3:50 am
Hot damn. I've never thought of feet as sexy before, but I think i'll be reevaluating as of now.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it :)
Chapter 3
Reviewer: Twinfetish (Signed)
06 Jul 2009 11:58 pm
That was a really interesting chapter. It was sweet of John to remember Lorne's favorite after shave. Also, the teasing Rodney endured was cute. The women in the infirmary were hilarious, and I agreed with most of their sentiments. The foot massage was hot. And I like the bit at the end where Lorne feels special because he gets to see a personal side of John. Good work.

Author's Response: Thank you! It's nice to hear that I managed to score on those. Next Saturday another chapter and a little bonus... :)
Chapter 3
Reviewer: Laughing Magpie (Anonymous)
06 Jul 2009 9:48 am
Enjoying the tension so far, but in that last chapter, I think you meant "appalled" instead of "appealed". Kinda makes a bit more sense that way... ;)

Author's Response: thank you, and you're right. I corrected the mistake. :)
Chapter 1
Reviewer: NanaC (Anonymous)
05 Jul 2009 1:29 am
Wow, this was amazing!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Chapter 3
Reviewer: go suck on a lemon (Signed)
29 Jun 2009 5:16 pm
Aww poor Lorne, whumpage hurts so. Great chappie!

Author's Response: Yup. Defenitely whump. Didn't really mean it, but here we are. And more is coming our way... :))
Chapter 2
Reviewer: speciallaura (Anonymous)
28 Jun 2009 7:03 am
sorry
it was ment to say "Entertaining" not entreating. oops

the interaction between the two of them was very Entertaining.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Funny how I didn't notice the mistake, but they say that you can read any word as long as the frist and last letter remains in place. Like I just demonstrated :)) Stay tuned, more updates will come!
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Reviewer: speciallaura (Anonymous)
28 Jun 2009 6:58 am
Thank-you soooo much for updating. I loved this chapter, the interaction between the tow of them was very entreating. I love how your not rushing in to anything but letting it grow.
Chapter 2
Reviewer: Dylaila (Anonymous)
28 Jun 2009 3:40 am
I really like this story, can't wait for an update.

Author's Response: Thank you, Upsates will come next Saturday :)
Chapter 2
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
27 Jun 2009 10:13 pm
Aw, poor Evan. Getting hurt like that... but c'mon! They're going to talk about all this tension, aren't they?

Author's Response: Maybe, maybe not. Sheppard's the kind of man who's uncomfortable with expressing his feelings. On the other hand, does Sheppard even have feelings for Lorne, or is it just a crush?
Chapter 2
Reviewer: Hexx (Anonymous)
23 Jun 2009 1:09 pm
I don't like bad things happening to Lorne, but like seeing Shep look after him.

More pls :D

Author's Response: Thanks, I don't liek bad things happening to Lorne either. But he's a tough guy, he'll handle.rnMore will be coming up. I'll update every saturday. :))
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
23 Jun 2009 5:10 am
That was too close for Evan! Glad the cavalry got there in the nick of time.

What next for John and Evan? Can Evan stick to his decision to keep things platonic with John? What will John think about it now he's fully awake?

Laura.

Author's Response: Ah, wait and see! :)
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Reviewer: go suck on a lemon (Signed)
23 Jun 2009 2:25 am
Nice beginning, more please!

Author's Response: Thank you!rnI'll update every Saturday so stay tuned.
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Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
21 Jun 2009 1:21 pm
Aw. It's a happy ending - kind of. I wish they could've been together, but I understand Lorne's thinking. =]

Author's Response: Actually it's not the end at all. The story has nine chapters to it and an interlude. rnI'll update every Saturday so wait and see what will happen next. :)
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Reviewer: speciallaura (Anonymous)
21 Jun 2009 6:06 am
very nice. i'm looking forword to more.

Author's Response: Thank you :)
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Reviewer: Andy (Anonymous)
21 Jun 2009 6:02 am
I like this very much, the story has a great relevance!

more, more, more!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)rnMore will come every Saturday from now on.
Chapter 1
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