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Fantastic series so far...any more instalments coming?

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Oh, is there more? *hopes, hopes, hopes*

"the nice woman standing behind you." HAHAHA! That was a perfect ending, but I do love that John couldn't resist Rodney's kisses :)

I love Rodney.
Oh this is just lovely!
I mean, Rodney will make a mess, and possibly salvage everything in wonderfully fracked ways. I mean, come ON! Chaya with "He's -My- HUSBAND!!!" being the first words Rodney blurts to her. *dies*

Or the Genii? Oh that would be messy as hell. They know they're a couple. Kolya would push John a bit too far, if he said he'd shot Rodney to mess with him.

Ahh everything might change... or it might not. Who knows? Except you of course. *watches with gleeful anticipation* Lovely as always, and yes I'm going to sit eagerly waiting for more, because you never fail to make me smile with this universe.

I am so happy to seet another installment in this series. It is both sad and happy to read. Rodney is a very complex man on the show. He can be very gruff and be very sensitive man. I am happy to see this here in your story. Please keep up the good work.

This series came up in a request on Live Journal's SGA Storyfinders. I'm glad it did. It was a hoot.

Oh, I really hope there will be more in this series. It quite simply makes me smile. I love the storyline and relationship you've set up between these two.

This story was cute. However, proscribe means to ban, denounce or condemn. I think you're looking for subscribe, which means to assent.

Still loving this series!

Snicker. "That nice woman standing behind you"

Yes, well Rodney does love to put his foot in it, doesn't he?

Oooh! I like this chapter! I've read the first two multiple times and plan to be rereading this one too. Nice!

I'm very glad to see you've continued this AU, I wait with bated breath to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.

this story makes me smile. you have Rodney's voice down pat. he really has no social skills at all. And John is kind of bemused. Great!

So glad to see another installment of this series. It's grand fun. Keep it up!

XD Oh, goodness. I love this series of yours!

I love the whole series. How it doesn't take itself seriously and just has fun with the goofy premise.

The only problem I had was in this latest installment. This line in particular:
"Then again, he wasn't a girl either, and even he was getting tired of all this waiting."

It's just randomly sexist and really threw me out of the story for a moment. Instead of "girl" you could just say "teenager" or "virging/blushing virgin" or any other things. The "girl" and the tone it was written is rather insulting seeming. *shrugs*

Author's Response: Thanks! On the sexist note: sorry about that - none of these have really gone through a beta, and I wasn't really thinking of that when I typed it. It's one of those moments where a bit of my family life seeps through, I'm afraid. (My brothers constantly tease me with accusations of acting like a girl/doing stuff like a girl - and I counter, of course, with the fact that I am one.) Should be fixed now. If you see anything else that throws you off, or even something as small as a spelling error, feel free to point it out!

I havn't even read this and I know its gonna be awsome!! Hope you keep writing more in the series it is just toooo cute!!! and Major McKay?? AWSOME!!!

The step to the left has resulted in some amazing differences in perspective. The growling dog really makes a statement.