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Reviewer: solorinobscurum (Signed)
09 Sep 2009 12:16 am
This made me so happy! I love the way you wrote this. So much so that I really can't imgaine Lorne as submissive. It also makes sense to me--Sheppard would want something like this--to give over control to someone else.

It's something he would want to do after having the entire Atlantis expedition depending on his leadership--submitting to Lorne is more than sexual. And it just explores those pesky emotions that everyone seems to think that Sheppard doesn't deal well with. I don't know if that's what you were going for, but that's what I got out of it. That...and it's incredibly hot.

I noticed that Sheppard didn't actually agree to stopping with the stupid stunts and near-suicide misses...I can't but help wonder how Lorne would take Sheppard's stunts in "Enemy at the Gate."

Anyway, I loved this so very much. I really hope that sometime in the future you revisit this pair and their dynamic soon--because it is just that good. Maybe those 'several times since Christmas.'

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Reviewer: go suck on a lemon (Signed)
29 Jun 2009 4:34 am
That is one of the most incredibly intense things i have ever read on this site. Holy god, Evan is just GUH!!!

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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
28 Jun 2009 6:35 am
Awww. So very, very hot and I'm glad to see they've figured out that it's more than just sex.

Laura.

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Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
27 Jun 2009 1:12 am
Oh, I just love how you write them like this!

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