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Reviewer: scififreak (Signed)
04 Aug 2009 11:46 pm
This needs a sequel! I want to see you develop this "feeling" John has in his chest for Lorne. lol

Author's Response: Heh, that might get explosive... :) Thanks for commenting!
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Reviewer: Athena (Anonymous)
03 Aug 2009 8:36 am
I am visiting this site as a novice. Liked what I read. Touchy written about friendship, distortion adn forgiveness. Beautiful, keep on writing.

Author's Response: Great to hear that you liked it & many thanks for the review! And yes, I have a feeling that I just might.... :)
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Reviewer: Lorne_ly Lady (Anonymous)
19 Jul 2009 3:29 pm
I loved this. Definitely one of my favorite SGA fics out there! The friendship between Lorne and Sheppard was never really explored enough in the show for my liking, but you just knew that they had to be close friends. Friends who trusted each other implicitly, just as Sheppard does here. He *knew* that something was wrong about this situation, that this was something that Evan Lorne would be incapable of, and you got that across without excessive displays of emotion or remorse. Beautifully done, not maudlin or overdone. Thank you for posting.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, glad you liked it! I can't help but be intrigued by these two and their (non-)communication... :) Thanks a lot for commenting!
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Reviewer: samanthacarter (Signed)
08 Jul 2009 11:57 am
It's a nice story, even if a little under-developed. It has the potential to become a nice slash series if you intend to write more (whic, by the way, are you?). At any rate, it was a nice GEN/Pre-Slash story! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Wrote this as a little study into complex emotions and trust dynamics in a tricky situation. Intended this as a stand-alone but why not? Thanks for commenting! :)
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Reviewer: speciallaura (Anonymous)
08 Jul 2009 2:56 am
i'm so glad Sheppard didn't give up on him. I liked that you didn't rush into a relationship at the end. good story.

Author's Response: :) Thank you!
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Reviewer: NanaC (Anonymous)
07 Jul 2009 11:32 pm
Loved it! The 'open' end regarding Lorne and Sheppard was very good!

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you liked it!
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