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Reviewer: Mystic (Signed)
19 Oct 2009 10:02 pm
A good story on how something little could lead to something big. Btw, you really need a beta for this story and not just spell check. You have missing words and wrong words in many locations thoughout the story. Still a good story, just needs a bit of clean up.
Chapter 1
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
18 Oct 2009 11:59 pm
Aw, good for John, teaching Rodney how to swim. :)
Chapter 1