This was great! I'm left wondering why Teyla is suddenly evil, though. And invulnerable, apparently. It would be awesome if you wrote a prequel to explain this change.
Wonderful writing. I especially love your description of Rodney's eyes.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm happy you enjoyed it. As for Teyla being invulnerable? Well, she's wearing the shield Rodney made which protects her from outside attacks. The evilness is supposed to be a mystery. ;o)
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Reviewer: CountErebus (Anonymous)
10 Aug 2009 4:32 pm